Reflection of essay #3

First I changed the basic overall paper from a proposal to an actual ethical argument. Simply I confused the two because of what we were going over in class and followed the wrong guidelines. I then added actual ethical issues like childhood obesity and tried to explain how it is unethical. I also got a few different quotes to explain how childhood obesity is unethical and growing  "Between 2010 and 2020, new cases of Type 2 diabetes could increase tenfold; so could stroke, coronary heart disease, hypertension and arthritis. The number of cases could double again by 2030..." (Begley). This was one example of how I did this. I also expanded my original claim to include the cost of obesity as causing childhood obesity, the high cost of medical bills and possibility the cost of your own life. The only real thing besides rewriting my paper was displaying the problems of obesity instead of fixing it.