Reflection for paper #2

These are the changes that I did to my critique paper from its original draft. First I made sure to hit around the minimum amount of words/ pages to make it a full paper. I also went and changed some much needed grammar changes (mostly quotes and page numbers). I also went back and tried to make the arguments as solid as possible because they were a little to vague before. Basically I used quotes to give details of what I wanted to show and added more emotion to the argument to make it seem more like a critique. Basically I took the comments from Professor Brown and just fixed the problems that he pointed out, I expanded on things that he brought up, or I just deleted/ shortened anything that needed to fixed.