Monday, April 29, 2013

ethical argument draft


Erik Arndt
Prof. Brown
English 1B
April 17, 2013
Obesity: Jumbo sizing America
            Obesity. Just let the word sink in. We have all heard about the growing epidemic that the developed world is facing, and yet we have done little to stop it. These problems aren't yours, they're for someone else to worry about, or are they? Just look around and notice if this disease has spread into your daily life. Perhaps some friends or coworkers have put a little weight on, maybe your kids are a little huskier than you remember, or maybe even you have gained some extra weight? To beat the evil of obesity you must first know what that evil is "Obesity is defined as having a body mass index (BMI) above 30. Overweight means a BMI of 25 to 29.9. BMI is calculated by taking weight in pounds and dividing it by the square of height in inches, and multiplying the result by 703."( Landau). Do you or a loved one fit into this category? Seeing the definition helps to understand how people (even yourself) can be classified or thought of as obese. Many people have slowly become obese over the years and more and more are joining the ranks overtime. This is because people are changing their habits, basically people are eating unhealthy food and living sedentary lives. People need to reform their daily lives and be healthier/ more active if they want to save themselves from high costs of medical bills and help our children live healthier lives.
            The cost of obesity is more than just you or someone being overweight. People need to look to the future cost of what it is to be obese. "Between 2010 and 2020, new cases of Type 2 diabetes could increase tenfold; so could stroke, coronary heart disease, hypertension and arthritis. The number of cases could double again by 2030..." (Begley). People who are already prone to heart dieses and other genetic or family dieses should pay more attention to this information. The simple cost of your own medical bills should make you realize that being obese is not cheap and the dieses mentioned before were not only expensive but also could lead to your death. These reasons are truly important and relevant to our children's lives. "But there is hope, if adults across America would reduce their body mass index, the report said. If the average body mass index were lowered by 5% by 2030, states could save billions of dollars while helping many people. That's the equivalent of a 200-pound, 6-foot-tall person losing 10 pounds." (Landau). See hope and knowing how to beat obesity can happen, we just need to take some baby steps first. The biggest Issue of obesity is children. So many children are overweight and more are sure to follow. Parents are not enforcing their children to eat well, play outside or even exercising at all. How do people not see that children are the future (literally) and that they need to be educated on how to live a healthy life. "A successful approach to reducing obesity and its comorbidities must also embrace understanding of community-level factors including the social, built, and natural environments. These environmental influences interact with a child's diet, physical activity, genetic makeup, and metabolism..." ( Brogan and Partners).
            Most people will say that obesity is a problem but it's not my problem. Well it may not be your problem now but it might be in a few years or even to someone who is close to you. Well obesity is a rising problem but it's a problem we can get ahead of, we just need to take the reins and slow it down. Well People should just buy better foods and stop eating out. Well that would be one big step in helping to reduce obesity but money can become an issue. People can and do live off fast food and because it is so cheap people can spend less than going to a supermarket and buying healthy food. What about working out? I go to the gym everyday and I'm not obese, why can't people do that too? Well not everyone wants to go the gym. Also people can not always afford to go to the gym. This also brings up how people who can afford to go to the gym but don't know how to work out but cant afford a personal trainer to teach them how to work out correctly. We can sit here all day and poke holes in why obesity exists but the real argument is people need to change, Change is scary and people don't like scary. So why would we want change then? Well look at the facts and just see if change is scarier than the really awful realities of obesity.
            To sum it all up for you, obesity is a growing problem and it will lead to higher costs to both you and your family, and this will affect your children's  future and may lead to even bigger issues. The big picture to look at is what will this epidemic bring about? Will this affect me or to someone who I love? Or will this growing problem really make it impossible to have medical care in the future simply because all the medical practices will be busy with all the obese people? Basically look at how will the this epidemic will affect our country as a whole. Will we have a population of people to weak to defend ourselves? Will we be too fat to get out of bed and even clothe ourselves? If that is the case then who will take care of the new generation or will there even be a new generation to be taken care of?



Citation
Begley, Sharon. "Fat and Getting Fatter: U.S. Obesity Rates to Soar by 2030." Reuters. Thomson Reuters, 18 Sept. 2012. Web. 17 Apr. 2013. http://www.reuters.com/article/2012/09/18/us-obesity-us-idUSBRE88H0RA20120918
Environment and Obesity in the National Children's Study
Leonardo Trasande, Chris Cronk, Maureen Durkin, Marianne Weiss, Dale A. Schoeller, Elizabeth A. Gall, Jeanne B. Hewitt, Aaron L. Carrel, Philip J. Landrigan and Matthew W. Gillman
Environmental Health Perspectives , Vol. 117, No. 2 (Feb., 2009), pp. 159-166
Published by: Brogan & Partners
Article Stable URL: http://www.jstor.org/stable/25434919

Landau, Elizabeth. "Health Care Costs to Bulge along with U.S. Waistlines." CNN. Cable News Network, 01 Jan. 1970. Web. 17 Apr. 2013http://www.cnn.com/2012/09/18/health/us-obesity.


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