Wednesday, May 22, 2013

Final Reflection (forgot on final paper)


Reflection

            To compare my original proposal paper draft to final draft it would be night and day. The first draft was under 1000 words. I had a very weak proposal and one that was unconstitutional which professor Brown did comment on. So I thought of a much better Proposal, one that was possible and allowed a lot of room to work with. I also included actual quotes and a citation page as well. I also took the advice from my partner on a few thing (like actually writing a paper instead of rushing last minute). I also took my own advice from my advice to my partner and followed the actual proposal prompt. I had forgotten it before and it made my paper much worse. I also changed the final part of my paper because it did not match my new overall paper. To basically conclude, I wrote a whole new paper. I built it up from scratch and made sure it the basic prompt.

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