I changed my first essay from the original draft to the final paper by drastically changing the thesis. The first one was good but I had a lot of information that I thought was important to my paper and I originally did not give it justice with my original thesis. I also added more detail to the reformation part of the essay and gave a bigger voice to other side of the argument. I did forget to change the title which I did not think about till after the paper's submission. But besides all that I believe that my paper demenstrated the basic ideas of my original draft just with a better center overall.
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